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Ryan Joyce
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p.1 #1 · Darn Skateboarding


First post here. Was back in June i took this photo, Bush fires all over Melbourne were making a sunset i cant forget easy and i took a photo with my old camera.

Nikon D70 50mm f5.6 @ 1/250th Iso400 2x Sunpak544s Quantum 4i Slaves



http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1064/527721647_29690f8136_o.jpg


Edited by Ryan Joyce on Dec 24, 2007 at 10:00 AM GMT



Dec 24, 2007 at 09:53 AM
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p.1 #2 · Darn Skateboarding


120 views and nothing?


Dec 24, 2007 at 07:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · Darn Skateboarding


I like it. Looks like it could be very slightly overexposed and if you had an angle roughly 120* to the right, allowing you to capture the face of the boarder, it might be a little better. But then of course you probably wouldn't get the sunset.

Just a thought and since you were asking for comments, I thought I'd contribute something. Overall I like it.

-fool



Dec 24, 2007 at 10:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · Darn Skateboarding


Thank you RyM17 & Fool, I just wanted to see what someone would say. Hard to get a comment on this site. His shirt is blown out a small amount, was just before i invested in a external light meter.


Dec 25, 2007 at 01:13 AM
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p.1 #5 · Darn Skateboarding


Honestly, a decent shot. I like it. But I'd love it if you'd droped the ambient exposure a little to darken the sunset, which would increase the contrast between the rider's face/shirt, and the sunset, and give more saturated colors to the sunset. As it is, the lightness of the riders shirt/face kind of gets lost in the lightness of the sky.

Alternatively, if you shot in RAW, processing 2 versions, one with less exposure on the sky, and the other with the existing exposure on the subject, with a blend in PP could make all the difference.


Harvey



Dec 25, 2007 at 05:23 AM
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p.1 #6 · Darn Skateboarding


hfillmore, Thank you for taking the time in that comment. Words like that always make me think on how i can shoot it next time. But with the blending photo editing im not into the editing side. I'm kinda old school with Shooting photos, Shoot/levels/contrast/resize/post, im very basic. And this was shot in RAW. Thanks again.


Dec 25, 2007 at 10:02 AM
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p.1 #7 · Darn Skateboarding


Ryan Joyce wrote:
hfillmore, Thank you for taking the time in that comment. Words like that always make me think on how i can shoot it next time. But with the blending photo editing im not into the editing side. I'm kinda old school with Shooting photos, Shoot/levels/contrast/resize/post, im very basic. And this was shot in RAW. Thanks again.


I'm with you Ryan.... I hate the whole computer/PP thing. I really disdain spending hours on a shot to try to make up for what I couldn't get "in camera". In fact, I've never "blended" a multiple processed photo in my life. Just not my bag. I only mentioned it because I know that it can be done, and that others do it.

What I try to do in shots like this is to set the camera in manual and take a few test shots to get the sky looking nice and saturated. Once I get the sky looking the way I want, I leave that exposure setting as it is, and thenstart shooting with the subjectl, messing around with the flash settings to bring the subject up to where I want it. If all goes well, sometimes it even works

Harvey



Dec 25, 2007 at 07:27 PM
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p.1 #8 · Darn Skateboarding


Nice shot, the exposure is pretty good, a bit hot on the hand but otherwise good. Since the wood on the left adds nothing, you should shift a bit right and pan so that you get the same perspective (more or less) and you don't have the pole.

Nice background



Dec 28, 2007 at 09:42 PM





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