sbeme
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Welcome, Gabriel.
It would help if you could include your EXIF (camera settings) with your posts.
First image is, as Paul said, blue. Underexposed, with what I would imagine was the wrong WB setting in camera and possibly mixed lighting sources. I'm not sure if you have a post-processing program, but the white balance could be corrected after the fact with Lightroom, Photoshop, perhaps others.
Compositionally, I think you have too much of his elbow and I think focus of the image would be around both hands. So you might crop from the left, close to his wrists. Also appears a bit tightly framed on top.
Second image is the best. Paul's PS work improved it. I like the out of focus background and the brown leaves complement her hair tones nicely. It feels like she is looking just slightly to the right of the camera;
Again, if you can edit your image, you might clone out the road in the back, filing it with adjacent background.
Third image nicely captures the warmth of the hug. I'd crop closer, eliminating the space over his shoulder. The image really doesnt capture the couple, with his back turned, so I think you want to bring the attention more directly toward her face. Including his right shoulder and a portion of his head preserves the context.
Edited by sbeme on Nov 30, 2007 at 10:29 PM GMT
Edited on Dec 01, 2007 at 07:24 AM
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