Rose - FM Forums

Moderated by: Fred Miranda

Visit the FM Store · Image Upload · Buy & Sell
FM Forum Rules
What are the criteria?

FM Forums | Photo Critique | Join Image Upload
end

Andrew K
Offline
Image Upload: On

p.1 #1 · Rose

Any advice on how to better?

Edited on Nov 21, 2007 at 08:34 PM

Nov 17, 2007 at 04:39 PM

naypay
Offline
Image Upload: On

p.1 #2 · Rose

Interesting light. Nice composition. I would increase your aperture to get more depth of field on the flower, especially the front. My general rule is if you are going for the shallow depth of field make it way more intentional and make the composition work accordingly. Otherwise make the whole image in focus. When areas are just a little out of focus the perception is that it's not intentional but a mistake.

Edited on Nov 21, 2007 at 08:34 PM

Nov 17, 2007 at 07:18 PM

Jim Schemel
Offline
Image Upload: On

p.1 #3 · Rose

Nice pic.You might try a bnw and this would be a nice pic for a thank you card or something like that.See below
-Jim

Image Hosted by ImageShack.us

Edited on Nov 21, 2007 at 08:34 PM

Nov 17, 2007 at 10:17 PM

Scott Stoness
Online
Image Upload: On

p.1 #4 · Rose

Very pretty colors. Nice framing. It feels a little soft to me. I would try more sharpening.

Edited on Nov 21, 2007 at 08:34 PM

Nov 18, 2007 at 06:07 PM

Andrew K
Offline
Image Upload: On

p.1 #5 · Rose

thanks for the help, sorry i didnt reply sooner tech issues. I'll work on the sharpening and post it soon.

Nov 21, 2007 at 08:34 PM


FM Forums \| Photo Critique \| Join Image Upload end