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p.1 #1 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Im a n00b! here and to photography i haven't been shooting that long.. I do mostly night club photography and this girl at a bikini contest asked me if i could snap some pics so sat late afternoon we went out and i took a couple of snap shots.. here is one and a link to the rest.. there is no nudity but it is bikini so im not sure if i can post them directly in here or a link to, but im trying to learn all i can so any feedback good or bad would be great thanks

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Thanks


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Jan 22, 2007 at 01:50 PM
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p.1 #2 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


http://www.jacobthephotographer.com/hooters/IMG_1109_myspace.jpg
thats the winner



Jan 22, 2007 at 01:52 PM
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p.1 #3 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


The first thing I noticed is she is posing exactly the same in both photos, particularly the way she's grabbing her bikini bottom


Jan 22, 2007 at 02:01 PM
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p.1 #4 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Your photos are fine for this forum (no warning needed for bikini shots, except maybe
warning about "not work safe"). bocaj's image is very dramatic, better without the
railing, but for spontaneous works well.



Jan 22, 2007 at 02:09 PM
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p.1 #5 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


TTLKurtis: The legs are vastly different in pose 1 and 2. I agree with _mpi_ about the image being the winner.

bocaj: I think the lights are a little hot on the first one.



Jan 22, 2007 at 02:10 PM
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p.1 #6 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Ed Peters wrote:
Your photos are fine for this forum (no warning needed for bikini shots, except maybe
warning about "not work safe"). bocaj's image is very dramatic, better without the
railing, but for spontaneous works well.


UGH yes the railing is horrible... but the sun was going down fast and I had to get some sky shots, it was on top of a parking garage so I just snapped off a few.. if the background was nice I would have been ecstatic about this pic, do the spots on the ground take away should i photoshop those out and make them match the rest of the concrete or is that just unneeded photoshop time..



Jan 22, 2007 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #7 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


_mpi_ and Justin: why would you pick that for the winner? just curious on what your thoughts were on why? its funny that pic I kept passing over but i needed one of her in a different bikini so that was the last one i just kinda stuck in after passing it by like 20 times... but its growing on me rapidly..


Jan 22, 2007 at 02:30 PM
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p.1 #8 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


5 and 6 are very nice.


Jan 22, 2007 at 03:21 PM
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p.1 #9 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


#4 and 6 are most flattering.

Joe P



Jan 22, 2007 at 03:25 PM
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p.1 #10 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


The facials are great in the first two, but it trails off after that. Keep her smiling!


Jan 22, 2007 at 03:34 PM
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p.1 #11 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Nice lighting in the evening shot...6 is also quite nice...


Jan 22, 2007 at 04:31 PM
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p.1 #12 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


why does she look like she going to take her bottoms off................


Jan 22, 2007 at 04:31 PM
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p.1 #13 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


5 is my favorite, and the railing doesn't even bother me. it just simply conveys a more "urban" mood, although, I have a feeling there's a better word out there than urban.



Jan 22, 2007 at 05:04 PM
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p.1 #14 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


im still learning flash, can you tell me how you setup your flash, and diffussion? particularly the sunset ones?? thanks =)


Jan 22, 2007 at 05:09 PM
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p.1 #15 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


She is so hot. Very well done. you are lucky.


Jan 22, 2007 at 05:26 PM
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p.1 #16 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Bikini snapshots...how original...


Jan 22, 2007 at 07:48 PM
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p.1 #17 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


5 worked for me.


Jan 22, 2007 at 09:05 PM
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p.1 #18 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


4 & 6 Are prime, but try not to show her scars from breast augmentation which are prevalent in the first two as well as the last photo somewhat giving away they're fake...Just my .02$


Jan 22, 2007 at 09:38 PM
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p.1 #19 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


Damn! you're right! I never would have guessed those were fake until you pointed out the scars!

As for the snapshots...(that I would have happily taken myself just the same),
I like #3 - just because it provides a more natural, and therefore appealing, perspective - despite the lighting.

As for #6 - what are you people thinking? get your head out of the gutter - this is a photography forum and photographically, this shot fails every rule in the book - trees AND lamp posts out of head, railing piercing arms, wall/floor transitions - in a building-well, centered composition, flat lighting.

Nice looking gal though!



Jan 23, 2007 at 03:31 AM
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p.1 #20 · HOOTERS bikini calendar submission shoot. feedback pls :)


I like 4 and 5 the most


Jan 23, 2007 at 04:38 AM
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