First two look too orange.. did you use a gold reflector?, and the model looks really "stiff"... Tan lines can be Pshopped-out..
Third pic looks too desaturated for my tastes.
L8tr!
Didn't think the first two were very crisp considering the equipment you are using. Perhaps you softened in post. Agree that the color looks off as well.
I liked the lines in the 3rd. Perhaps a slight amount of fill on her face may have helped as her waist and right arm appear brighter.
goldfinga wrote:
First two look too orange.. did you use a gold reflector?, and the model looks really "stiff"... Tan lines can be Pshopped-out..
Third pic looks too desaturated for my tastes.
L8tr!
I was using a white reflector. I did try to warm it up a bit by asjusting white balance a little. Thanks for the look and coments!
Wink wrote:
Didn't think the first two were very crisp considering the equipment you are using. Perhaps you softened in post. Agree that the color looks off as well.
I liked the lines in the 3rd. Perhaps a slight amount of fill on her face may have helped as her waist and right arm appear brighter.
Best,
Gerry
I shot the first two with the kit lens. I was actually fairly surprised at how sharp they were. It looks fairly sharp on my machine at home.
Points well taken about the lighting on the 3rd. Thanks for looking!
andrewhed wrote:
I agree number three is a great pose. It's kinda one im gonna try and remember. Very well executed.
Andrew
She is a very tall model - so I was a bit skeptical about how to go about getting "in the grass" pictures. She looked very lanky when perpendicular to the camera. I suggested just getting comfy in the grass and I walked around her to look for a good angle. Once I saw something I liked - I asked her to replicate what she was doing but to rotate for the sake of lighting.
That pose is awesome for a few reasons. It gets the whole hands thing right out of the way, it looks super comfortable, and that shadow across her jeans in the front is super sexy. Great work, but somehow you have to put the skin tone back in this one! Its such a keeper!
