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p.1 #1 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Oxbow Bend at sun up. Let the girls sleep and took in a beautiful sunrise. C & C welcome, let me know what you think and what I can do better.

Photo is with 6D, 24-70 f2.8, set f22 and iso 100. 3 shot pano.

Dan





Sunrise at Oxbow




Jun 18, 2013 at 09:46 PM
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p.1 #2 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Stunning!


Jun 18, 2013 at 09:49 PM
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p.1 #3 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


It is beautiful but at F22 you should be losing some overall sharpness to diffraction. If you can, take it again at F8 and again at F13 and compare with you F22 shot and see.


Jun 18, 2013 at 10:16 PM
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p.1 #4 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Dan,
WOnderful spring shot.



Jun 18, 2013 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Nice work -- just need to trim a few loose branches on the extreme right edge.


Jun 19, 2013 at 01:55 AM
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p.1 #6 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Hey Dan,

Nicely done here. I like this. I do agree with Paul though, clone out those couple of branches on the right side.

Jim



Jun 19, 2013 at 02:33 AM
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p.1 #7 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Wow, I love it!


But since you're asking for C&C, I think it's just a tad off-level.

I'd also love to see a few alternates where the tallest peak wasn't dead-center, but I have a feeling this was the best choice, anyway.


Or maybe, now let's get radical: Move the clouds over to the right or left a little bit. so they're framed by two different peaks. Or maybe just raise them a little higher. - and then of course also move their reflections in the water.

I think that would somehow be more "balanced"



Jun 19, 2013 at 03:14 AM
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p.1 #8 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


great job, I love that place


Jun 19, 2013 at 03:30 AM
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p.1 #9 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


very nice image Dan


Jun 19, 2013 at 03:42 AM
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p.1 #10 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


We are leaving Missoula today for this area. Your image has my anticipation heightened. Normally I prefer shooting @ F8... Do not have a reason other than I like the IQ @ that stop. Jim


Jun 19, 2013 at 04:15 AM
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p.1 #11 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Yes, why f/22?? No need for that, especially since it brings serious diffraction into the mix. No need to go above f/8 with this lens when you have no foreground elements that need to be in focus. I like this classic image but I'm sure you could have walked away with a sharper image if the lens was opened up a bit.


Jun 19, 2013 at 07:15 AM
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p.1 #12 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


lovely

nice to see these shots
because when I was there in 2010 it was really bad weather



Jun 19, 2013 at 08:22 AM
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p.1 #13 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


The Grand Teton looks majestic! Very nice!


Jun 19, 2013 at 10:52 AM
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p.1 #14 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Thanks all for the comments! C & C is nice too.

1) Why f22, cause I wanted max depth of field and sharpness.................. but yes the forground is far enough away I could have backed it off some. I need to read more about diffraction and understand it a bit better. I am just an amature working on skill level and technique. This is one of the sharpest photo's I have ever taken, in part because I now have a new & decent tripod. Anyone want to buy the 3 cheep ones I tried first By the way, the full size photo at 7600 X 3200 (not downsized for posting) has incredible detail. I think it will make a nice 20 X 48 canvas print.

2) Branches on the right - ARG. The wife wanted them completely cropped out and I wanted to extend the photo more to the right and include more of the right hand shore line, to bring your eye into the photo. I agree the few are distracting, more shoreline or no branches would probably work. But agree that how it is causes distractions.

3) Moving the tallest peak off center is an interesting observation. I had that thought last night, maybe I will play with it more in the next day or two.

4) Weather, arg!!!!! The 1st 3 mornings it was cloudy, raining, or both. This popped out the 4th morning when we left. I left my girls sleep in.

Again, thanks all for the comments.
Dan



Jun 19, 2013 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #15 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Sneakyracer wrote:
The Grand Teton looks majestic! Very nice!


Isn't it Mt. Moran?

Really nice job of shooting and processing the pano. It makes me want to go there again!

Cal



Jun 19, 2013 at 01:42 PM
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p.1 #16 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


This is beautiful. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings landscape. Very peaceful.


Jun 19, 2013 at 02:04 PM
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p.1 #17 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


DanNehmer wrote:


3) Moving the tallest peak off center is an interesting observation. I had that thought last night, maybe I will play with it more in the next day or two.


Hey, you did it! I definitely prefer this version.

- but it would be good to also leave the original & see what others think of the change.



Jun 19, 2013 at 02:09 PM
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p.1 #18 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


"Hey, you did it! I definitely prefer this version."

No Cableaddict, it's still the same photo. Haven't changed it, yet! I will post the new edit when I get a chance to.

Dan



Jun 19, 2013 at 03:19 PM
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p.1 #19 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


Ah, this is funny: (and interesting)

I didn't have my browser window open enough to the right, and was further zoomed-in than last night, so I was actually seeing the pic with part of the right-side cropped off. I noticed that those branches "were gone" and the peak was over to the right a bit, and figured you changed it.

- and FWIW: It looks great that way! - but that's a lot of real estate to lose. It looks almost as good (to me) with just a little shaved-off of the LEFT side, (just past those two little white dots on the shoreline) and the result is much more panoramic.

Also good as-is, of course.

Edited on Jun 19, 2013 at 10:41 PM · View previous versions



Jun 19, 2013 at 04:15 PM
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p.1 #20 · Oxbow Bend At Sun Up


love it....great work with the pano


Jun 19, 2013 at 05:26 PM
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