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John Richter
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Taken a few weeks back at Deception Creek here in WA.

Your thoughts and comments are appreciated.

Thanks

JBR

Single Shot, Gitzo Legs with Manfotto 410 Geared Head, Canon T3i, Tokina 11-16mm (set at 12mm), 100 ISO, 1/10 sec., f22, Lightroom 4 to TIFF, then a slight use of tonal contrast in Nik Color Efex Pro plugin. Most of the PP takes place in LR.


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Edited on Jun 18, 2013 at 04:26 AM · View previous versions



Jun 17, 2013 at 01:28 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Very nice, John.


Jun 17, 2013 at 05:06 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


This has a very refreshing feel, and you've handled the direct light very well. I think your shutter speed was a very wise choice. My only suggestion would be to darken the mid tones and dark tones just a hair to bring out some more richness to the slope on the right, and the mossy rock on the left. Excellent work!


Jun 17, 2013 at 05:12 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


looks like you're right smack into the water - nice!



Jun 17, 2013 at 10:11 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


I really like that "waist deep in the water" feel that this has. It really puts you in the scene. As mentioned, the shutter speed chosen is perfect, just enough to get some movement while retaining details. Well done.


Jun 17, 2013 at 11:55 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Very cool shot John. I really like the chosen shutter speed and the comp especially for the foreground.


Jun 17, 2013 at 06:04 PM
John Richter
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Thanks for looking, Everyone! I appreciate your time in commenting and suggestions.

I have added a reworked version per Ben's suggestions.

Better?

Thanks

JBR



Jun 18, 2013 at 04:28 AM
 

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Lovely work John. I have a slight preferance for the second version. (am looking at work with a non-calibrated monitor)


Jun 18, 2013 at 07:23 PM
John Richter
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Thanks, Helen! I'm glad you like it.

JBR



Jun 19, 2013 at 01:41 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Hey John,

Very cool looking. I like the subtle changes in your rework, those small changes made a big difference. Very creative work here.

Jim



Jun 19, 2013 at 05:08 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


John, Nice re-work, less saturation than our other post, I think I like this one better. You da man. Rick


Jun 19, 2013 at 09:02 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


A lovely scene, John.
And I love your "splash action!"
Prefer the reworked version.
Charlie



Jun 20, 2013 at 02:21 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


John,
wonderfully done. The rework is superb.



Jun 20, 2013 at 03:28 AM
John Richter
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Fresh Water Splash (+ Rework)


Jim/Rick/Charlie/Sunny,

I appreciate you looking and your kind words. Thanks to Ben for the rework suggestion.

JBR




Jun 20, 2013 at 01:52 PM





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