I like these for the most part. 5 and 6 seem a bit redundant. A couple look a bit soft (3 and 7), but may be the processing. A couple look a bit overexposed. Not sure if you use lightroom 4 or 5, but I love their highlight recovery tool for these type of issues. I like shots like 2, 8 and 9 the best.
You've got a few good keepers in that set, so well done on your first effort at Golf!
I would say that #1 is good, #2 is even better, #3 is back focused behind the girl on the green though. I would say that you needed to adjust your settings for #4 so you got more than 1/640th on that shot to freeze the club and ball much better. If you had gone to ISO400 you'd have gained 2 full stops and that would have done the trick for the shutter speed. #7 is a good idea, you've just got to nail the focus next time, and #8 is great timing and setup on that sand shot splash with the ball, next time try to get almost straight across from her to get a more dramatic placement of the sand and ball to see how you like that set up too, oh and good idea to move to ISO400 on that shot to get a much faster shutter speed that you needed to pull that one off very well.
