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wilmsenm
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Hi all, haven't posted here for a long time. We shot these on the roof of my office building in Amsterdam last Sunday. Feedback is appreciated.

1

http://www.martinwilmsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/DSC_8394.jpg

2

http://www.martinwilmsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/DSC_8349.jpg

3

http://www.martinwilmsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/DSC_8257.jpg

4

http://www.martinwilmsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/DSC_8134.jpg

5

http://www.martinwilmsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/DSC_8373.jpg

Thanks for looking.
Martin



Jun 08, 2013 at 05:04 AM
JoJo Gunn
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p.1 #2 · Roof top shoot...


Very nice!


Jun 08, 2013 at 09:59 AM
wilmsenm
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p.1 #3 · Roof top shoot...


JoJo Gunn wrote:
Very nice!

Thanks JoJo!



Jun 08, 2013 at 10:43 AM
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p.1 #4 · Roof top shoot...


nice work. #2, I could have done without the car and guy in the background, but I like your look overall




Jun 08, 2013 at 03:42 PM
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p.1 #5 · Roof top shoot...


exposure for the sky and vehicles is really very good here. I feel that the models don't need to be so bright though, particularly in #1 and #4.



Jun 09, 2013 at 05:44 AM
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p.1 #6 · Roof top shoot...


Very nice, except #2 isn't very appealing because the pose makes her thigh (model camera right) look too big, plus the crotch adds nothing to the image.


Jun 09, 2013 at 12:11 PM
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p.1 #7 · Roof top shoot...


First and last for me in this set.
Some beautiful photography. Crisp and clean



Jun 09, 2013 at 07:14 PM
Javier Crespin
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p.1 #8 · Roof top shoot...


Would like to have seen the rear end of the car


Jun 09, 2013 at 11:30 PM
wilmsenm
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p.1 #9 · Roof top shoot...


basehorhonda wrote:
nice work. #2, I could have done without the car and guy in the background, but I like your look overall



Thanks, much appreciated
Martin



Jun 10, 2013 at 02:30 AM
wilmsenm
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p.1 #10 · Roof top shoot...


wayne_eddy wrote:
exposure for the sky and vehicles is really very good here. I feel that the models don't need to be so bright though, particularly in #1 and #4.


Thanks, I used a 0.9 ND filter to make the sky dark (1/250th) and I used a ring flash to light the models. I do tend to make people very bright, I see that in most of my recent photos. I'll take it down a notch
Cheers,
Martin



Jun 10, 2013 at 02:31 AM
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p.1 #11 · Roof top shoot...


bbourizk wrote:
First and last for me in this set.
Some beautiful photography. Crisp and clean


Thnx!



Jun 10, 2013 at 02:46 AM
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BigIronCruiser wrote:
Very nice, except #2 isn't very appealing because the pose makes her thigh (model camera right) look too big, plus the crotch adds nothing to the image.


Indeed - point taken.
Cheers,
Martin



Jun 10, 2013 at 02:47 AM
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p.1 #13 · Roof top shoot...


who's that dude in 2?


Jun 10, 2013 at 11:21 PM
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p.1 #14 · Roof top shoot...


nice car and bike, but I find the foreground subjects in some quite distracting


Jun 11, 2013 at 10:49 AM





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