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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · how do you feel about this edit


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DSC_0174.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr

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May 27, 2013 at 12:28 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · how do you feel about this edit


Obviously an improvement, at least my opinion, removing the crane. However you've lost some detail in the water and sky. WB is better, removing what I see as a blue cast on structure.

Hard to tell much more given the small size.

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Bob



May 27, 2013 at 12:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · how do you feel about this edit


The crane removal is the most obvious change. The slight rotation helps, with a small amount of vertical correction maybe on the extreme edge.

The toning is of course a personal/subjective decision. Personally, I find toning in images with large expanses of highlight that don't take the toning to have a bit of an awkward appearance. If the toning is for artistic rendering, I might see about adding some tone to the expanses for a bit more harmony. Toned images are by nature contrast reducing, so the stark contrast of no tone vs. tone @ the water/sky vs. buildings is a bit incongruous for me. I realize this was a byproduct of the overexposure, but I'd look to tweak on it a touch.

I wasn't able to do as much with the sky as I might have hoped. You might have better results off the raw. A ton of ways you could go with this kind of image to generate the vibe of your choice ... and your small version doesn't do justice to the detail available.







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May 27, 2013 at 02:09 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · how do you feel about this edit


i think its lacking mid tones,,the sky is too bright for me,,maybe if you could bring it down some would help,,,


May 27, 2013 at 02:13 PM





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