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p.1 #1 · Montana Morning


From recent Spring trip. Thanks for looking.

Bob







May 23, 2013 at 03:49 PM
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p.1 #2 · Montana Morning


Hi Bob,
I'm on the border with this one. I think it would be better with the Tree centered..or a little more detail in the foreground.



May 23, 2013 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #3 · Montana Morning


Great shot. Try centering as Sunny suggested. If you cannot get shadow details in the bottom, try cropping the bottom a little bit.
Harsha



May 23, 2013 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #4 · Montana Morning


I like the fact that this is not centered and that there are no details in the shadows. Let them go black. Don't crop it either because the black of the lower frame balances the lighter tones higher in the frame.

I think it's fantastic.



May 23, 2013 at 07:31 PM
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p.1 #5 · Montana Morning


I also think that solid black areas do not add to the composition. I'd crop most of the black out. For it to be a "Montana Morning" I'd like to see a little more Montana!


May 23, 2013 at 07:55 PM
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p.1 #6 · Montana Morning


Hi Sunny, Harsha, cody hatch & Ralph,

Thanks very much for your most welcome and kind comments and editing suggestion. It was a good time to be there in that Montana remote mountain area after the previous night's rain.

Bob



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p.1 #7 · Montana Morning


I really want to like this, but I have a nit to pick:

The foreground ended up in Zone I and I think bumping this area up to II or dark III (if your capture actually recorded any information in this area) would be interesting. In the mid-ground, behind the tree, you can see what appears to be the base of a mountain/hill, but everything beyond it is obscured by the clouds (nothing you can control), and there is nowhere for the eye to go (except perhaps return to a foreground with a little detail to draw it back in).



May 24, 2013 at 12:26 PM
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p.1 #8 · Montana Morning


The amount of black does bother me some but I like the composition with the tree not centered.


May 24, 2013 at 02:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · Montana Morning


Hello Bob,

Such a clean and gorgeous scene here. I just like it very much.

Kee



May 24, 2013 at 02:11 PM
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p.1 #10 · Montana Morning


I love it the way it is, I would just add contrast to the clouds, not sure how much.




May 24, 2013 at 02:19 PM
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p.1 #11 · Montana Morning


Hi aubsxc, Don, Kee & jmraso,

Thanks very much for your most welcome and kind comments, suggestions and glad you like the image.

Bob



May 24, 2013 at 02:47 PM





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