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| p.1 #3 · Wide-Angle Composition |
my suggestion for the first is that the rock formation on the left feels too "heavy"..i like the line leading out but maybe next time get your feet wet and try a little close in the water or the boulder in the water might benenfit from being wet too..get some teva's and walk carefully!!
In the second one, there is no "real" foreground interest for me,,its just a bunch of brown stuff and again,,tooo much on the left side..
In the last one,,you have a horizontal line, the side of the mountain that doesnt lead my eye anywhere and the landscape behind it it so wonderful it feels cut off..also, the second little tree doesnt add anything and the upper right corner does not add to the composition. Even though the lighting is flat, it is good enough to shoot in and something can be brought out in photoshop