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It is hard to comment of any one image, because you pretty much have 8 images of the same subjects with very minor compositional changes or different wave action separating them. I would try and pick your top 4 from the night, then post those for better feedback.
I think #2 is my favourite. It seems sharper then the rest and the composition is good. I would like to see a bit more water to balance it out further, and the water exposure reduced though.
In the shots with the horizon at the very top of the image, a lens correction or distortion adjustment would help flatten that horizon line.