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jojomon11
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p.1 #1 · Portrait


Portrait of a lovely young lady from yesterdays sundown

Phil






Edited on May 17, 2013 at 05:04 PM · View previous versions



May 14, 2013 at 10:33 PM
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p.1 #2 · Portrait


Sweet.....


May 14, 2013 at 11:11 PM
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p.1 #3 · Portrait


Thanks Allen


May 14, 2013 at 11:12 PM
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p.1 #4 · Portrait


Maybe a little too straight-on. The off-set background is drawing my eye away also.
Douglas



May 15, 2013 at 11:10 AM
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p.1 #5 · Portrait


Thanks for comment Doug


May 15, 2013 at 11:36 AM
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p.1 #6 · Portrait


What lens did you use? Love the lighting and editing!


May 15, 2013 at 12:07 PM
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p.1 #7 · Portrait


Leica nocti 50 1f

Thanks



May 15, 2013 at 12:18 PM
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p.1 #8 · Portrait


I like the rich tonal range - just feels good to me.

Young lady is obviously enjoying the session, a sense conveyed to the viewer. For me, that warmth transcends the technical aspects of the image. Shall I just say I like it?

Regards,

Bob




May 15, 2013 at 02:24 PM
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p.1 #9 · Portrait


Thanks Bob you nailed it exactly what I was trying to convey, good eye Sir!

Phil



May 15, 2013 at 03:57 PM
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p.1 #10 · Portrait


Phil, it looks real to me. Not one of those over posed overly perfect technical images but real and I like the repeating shapes in the background and the sense of depth. Those elements also help give a sense of place. This actually looks like and honest portrait and I really like it as is....


May 15, 2013 at 08:58 PM
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p.1 #11 · Portrait


Thanks Allen, you know me I try to keep things as moody as possible w/comp and sharpness coming in second

Phil



May 15, 2013 at 09:11 PM
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p.1 #12 · Portrait


Looks good - sweet and soft


May 16, 2013 at 12:56 AM
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p.1 #13 · Portrait


Lovely indeed Phil.
I like straight on angles myself.



May 16, 2013 at 09:30 AM
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p.1 #14 · Portrait


Thanks for the Caralan and Mrchile

Phil



May 16, 2013 at 09:35 AM
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p.1 #15 · Portrait


Hi Phil. This looks pretty darn good and I don't mind the softness or angle one bit! My only nit is her legs being cut off. I'm not sure where you might crop it, but typically I think you'd want to step back a bit and get all of this beauty in the shot....

Cheers!

Greg



May 16, 2013 at 11:37 AM
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p.1 #16 · Portrait


Thanks Greg, yes tha was my thought has well, will do, good eye sir!

Phil



May 16, 2013 at 10:12 PM
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p.1 #17 · Portrait


I agree. The legs being cut off is the only downer.

Good reason for a re-shoot!



May 17, 2013 at 02:48 AM
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p.1 #18 · Portrait


I agree with Greg and Ratty, It's got a gorgeous feel to it overall though.


May 17, 2013 at 07:41 AM
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p.1 #19 · Portrait


I wouldn't get all that hung up on the legs. What are you trying to say? Are the legs important and is the crop that objectionable to make this not a strong portrait? I say the crop on the legs is not objectionable and this is not a shot about legs so they are not that important. If the crop were a little higher in really might be a problem.


May 17, 2013 at 04:38 PM
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p.1 #20 · Portrait


Thanks for the comments all, I'm moving on , shooting a golf tournament now

Phil



May 17, 2013 at 05:28 PM
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