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p.1 #1 · tower stairs


again at Fort Point, S.F.
a very simple image and maybe too simple?






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May 08, 2013 at 09:34 AM
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p.1 #2 · tower stairs


Tom,
Not too simple for sure, but I might take a look at some different crops to strengthen it.
Douglas



May 08, 2013 at 12:09 PM
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p.1 #3 · tower stairs


Douglas, thanks for looking, commenting, suggesting. I'll look at some crops.
regards, tom



May 08, 2013 at 12:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · tower stairs


Tom,

I like the image. The abstract interplay of straight lines and curves provide an overall conflicting balance to the viewer while the processing invites a closer inspection of the minute details.

The only thing that will improve this image is to crop three stairs off the bottom.

Sam




May 09, 2013 at 10:59 AM
tomandmarj
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p.1 #5 · tower stairs


Sam, many thanks for the comments. my eyes see the world in 35mm vision and hence never square. but you (and Douglas) might be right that this image should be cropped. I'll get out the saw!
regards, tom



May 09, 2013 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #6 · tower stairs


Great use of lines, light and textures Tom.

Cheers Ray



May 09, 2013 at 04:12 PM
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p.1 #7 · tower stairs


Very good tonal range and nice lines. I like it, Tom.
Chris



May 09, 2013 at 05:25 PM
Charlie Shugart
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p.1 #8 · tower stairs


Not too simple at all, Tom.
A very likable image all 'round.
My only nit is not really a nit. Because it's a vertical shot I have to scroll to see it- and I can never get a true sense of an image when I have to scroll it.
My guess is that there are several promising crops you might choose: and each would be different but probably not any better.
More than most- I think this is a matter of trying several crops and picking the one YOU like best.
Charlie



May 09, 2013 at 07:46 PM
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p.1 #9 · tower stairs


Charlie - vertical!
most my shots are vertical; guess that is how I see the world!!
but glad you like the image.
regards, tom



May 10, 2013 at 10:01 AM





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