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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · BW Scrum - less car


Color version posted some time back - curious about the BW rendition? The haze, fog, is intentional since it is the natural product of the hot bodies and rather cool weather.

Thanks for looking,

Bob






Edited on Apr 03, 2013 at 06:41 PM · View previous versions



Apr 01, 2013 at 06:31 PM
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p.1 #2 · BW Scrum - less car


I like #10 in the foreground, adds depth to the image.
If it were my image, I might try some tighter crops, even cutting off some of the players a bit. But that might just be me.



Apr 01, 2013 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #3 · BW Scrum - less car


Gee I wish that car wasnt there.
That nit aside, and something I know you cant control...
I continue to feel you have nailed the toning on these images.
Excellent action. Is that a bit of a locally generated dust storm?

Scott



Apr 01, 2013 at 08:45 PM
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p.1 #4 · BW Scrum - less car


although No 10 works compositionally I cant help wanting him to be sharp as well, need to lose the car RHS, great feel and drama to the image though


Apr 02, 2013 at 01:48 AM
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p.1 #5 · BW Scrum - less car


sbeme wrote:
Gee I wish that car wasnt there.
That nit aside, and something I know you cant control...
I continue to feel you have nailed the toning on these images.
Excellent action. Is that a bit of a locally generated dust storm?

Scott


Localized fog or mist, not dust - temp in 40's with intermittent rain - result of critical mass of hot bods generating some heat.

In fact, much more fun than sunny and temp in 70's-80's. Real weather, just some boys enjoying a bit of fun.

And a great atmosphere for images.

Re toning - exploring quadtones if for no other reason than consistency across images (stored presets). My workflow, hand-crafting, seldom lends itself to replication. And frankly, I prefer this method and the visual results - at least for the time being

Bob


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Apr 02, 2013 at 10:10 AM
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p.1 #6 · BW Scrum - less car


@jphoto & @pink,

Thanks for your suggestions and looking. Yes, may be able to harvest several variation from this one.

Re auto - agree. Have not tried that degree of surgery before but certainly a challenge to explore and meet.

Regards,

Bob




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Apr 02, 2013 at 10:13 AM





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