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Mar 17, 2013 at 04:37 AM
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I like this composition. Would like a bit more on the right, but I like how she is facing out of the frame. I like how the lines convey the opposite of "welcome" on the sign. I even like the landing pigeon. Good one, airfrogusmc!


Mar 17, 2013 at 02:23 PM
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James Markus wrote:
I like this composition. Would like a bit more on the right, but I like how she is facing out of the frame. I like how the lines convey the opposite of "welcome" on the sign. I even like the landing pigeon. Good one, airfrogusmc!


Thanks for the recommendation and I agree. I also fixed the vertical lines. What'a ya think?



Mar 17, 2013 at 02:48 PM
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Well seen, I like the mixture of lines. Not so bothered by the lack of space on the right. I like the right edge relationship to the fencing.


Mar 18, 2013 at 11:25 AM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #107 Both vertical and horizontal lines


This is a nice study piece. It's not "in your face", yet the deeper you look, the more you can see. Even her forearm and boot are mimicking the horizontals/verticals, with more subtle lines still to be found, including some that are only implied.

Lines of text
Joint lines
Seam lines
Stitched lines
Wrinkled lines
Feather pattern lines

It's an easy one to gloss over it at first glance, glad I took the time to revisit and dig into it more.



Mar 18, 2013 at 11:45 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #107 Both vertical and horizontal lines


Thanks everyone.....


Mar 18, 2013 at 12:33 PM
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I think it improved the image - I also like that you fixed the parallax lines.

airfrogusmc wrote:
Thanks for the recommendation and I agree. I also fixed the vertical lines. What'a ya think?




Mar 26, 2013 at 12:21 AM
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James Markus wrote:
I think it improved the image - I also like that you fixed the parallax lines.



James,

Thanks for the suggestion



Mar 26, 2013 at 12:52 AM





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