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SloPhoto Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #1 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Yet another A.S. ("Aspiring Second") thread. You can see wedding #2 here http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/1153867/0 Just got done shooting my sixth wedding and am starting to see some small improvement. It is time to look back at weddings 3-5 and target a few areas to improve on. As usual, I am looking to you guys to give me some feedback and drive that improvement. Harsh C&C please! Wedding 3: (not permitted to post the bride's face) - shooting for DavidCZ 1: 2: 3: 4: Wedding 4: - shooting for DavidCZ 1: 2: 3: 4: 5: 6: 7: Wedding 5: - shooting for jamie howell (deepbluejh) 1: 2: 3: 4: 5: 6: 7: Feb 01, 2013 at 09:54 PM

Scott Mosher Online • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #2 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Well done. I'll critique a little bit later. Feb 01, 2013 at 10:16 PM

SloPhoto Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Scott, I just sent you links to slightly more complete galleries. If any other long standing members want to give me a bit of a critique, I can send the links over in a PM. I am just limited in what I can post on a public forum. Feb 01, 2013 at 10:33 PM

nikonftw Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Get closer! Good stuff. Next time you second see if you can keep your 35mm glued to your body and get close. Feb 01, 2013 at 11:45 PM

SloPhoto Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #5 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 nikonftw wrote: Get closer! Good stuff. Next time you second see if you can keep your 35mm glued to your body and get close. I forced myself to use the 24mm 1.4 for nearly half of the last wedding (#6) and I am liking some of the results. Hopefully I can keep making progress in that area. They still feel a bit detached, but there was improvement in that respect. (I will post #6 for C&C after the primary blogs it) Feb 02, 2013 at 12:19 AM

JR Magat Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 I can see the progression, and I think wedding #5 was your strongest one. I feel in some of them you are trying to frame the shots, but maybe too close to the edges (4:3, 4:5, 4:6) I see no issues in wedding #5 (5:2, 5:5 are great!). I would include all of those for sure, but maybe the cake cutting shot could be closer in; but understandable since you're the 2nd shooter. Processing wise, your colors/WB are very good and it's very consistent. I think you're well on your way! Feb 02, 2013 at 01:57 AM

stevez32 Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #7 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Hey I know that guy in 6 for the 2nd wedding Feb 04, 2013 at 06:35 AM

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sgtbueno Offline • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #8 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 easy with the vibrance and saturation Feb 04, 2013 at 06:45 AM

SloPhoto Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #9 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 JR Magat wrote: I can see the progression, and I think wedding #5 was your strongest one. I feel in some of them you are trying to frame the shots, but maybe too close to the edges (4:3, 4:5, 4:6) I see no issues in wedding #5 (5:2, 5:5 are great!). I would include all of those for sure, but maybe the cake cutting shot could be closer in; but understandable since you're the 2nd shooter. Processing wise, your colors/WB are very good and it's very consistent. I think you're well on your way! Interesting comments. I have been trying to shoot wider/closer and I did not even notice that when I did place things on the edges I made it quite tight. On quick review, I have done this on a few frames at every wedding so far. Thanks for the input! sgtbueno wrote: easy with the vibrance and saturation Yea, I am having trouble getting robust yet subdued colors. I think it is due to me wanting pop/clean contrast in my skintones and messing with too much other stuff. I am not focused too much on PP right now, but I am definitely trying to make things more subtle each time. Feb 04, 2013 at 07:50 PM

Tony Hoffer Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Naveed!! Feb 04, 2013 at 08:05 PM

SloPhoto Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #11 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Tony Hoffer wrote: Naveed!! How do you know Naveed? Did he go to one of your workshops? Turns out he was a friend of a friend and I had just been sent a link to his work. Unfortunately, I did not recognize him until after the event. Feb 04, 2013 at 09:24 PM

chris_243 Offline • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #12 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Naveed!!! Feb 04, 2013 at 09:32 PM

deepbluejh Online • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #13 · A.S. Try 3 , 4, and 5 Joe is an excellent second shooter. For anyone in the Bay area looking for a second, I highly recommend him. Thanks again for coming out. Feb 05, 2013 at 12:14 AM

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