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Again, turning a subject's shoulders so they aren't squarish to the camera would be more flattering. For PP, consider a crop, color correction, retouching her teeth, some sharpening, and perhaps some vignette:
For color balance, I added a curves layer and clicked the gray dropper on the wrist watch band. Then I added a Hue/Sat layer and bumped the hue about +12 to reduce the resulting reddish cast.