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I posted it here to make it easier for others to view ... hopefully you have no objections to the post.
Directionally soft shadows rendering dimension and non-specular reflective highlights @ metal surfaces ... I got nothin' to add regarding your lighting setup, its looking good ... changes / adds would simply be a matter of S&P to taste, imo. I might tweak on PP or crop, but that's just S&P to taste stuff.
If you were selling me on the plate of food, sorry, it did not work. I think you need to start all over. I reviewed the comments and suggestions and still recommend you start over.
The first thing which comes to my mind is lack of focus and/or poor depth of field and landscape versus portrait.