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| p.2 #17 · Chicago Engagement Session - 12 hours !! |
These look beautiful Jon, mind if I ask whether you were shooting dx or fx, and which body?
(Longform, specific critique, assuming you still wanted one
3, I'm not crazy about the angle, too much negative space imo, but I'm sure the couple liked it. Same with 4, at least for the left hand side of the image, I feel like 6 could have been cropped a bit tigher, but of course I'm sure they loved it.
(the images I don't mention, I couldn't think of something to improve right away.:P)
7, I feel could have also been cropped a bit more tightly. 10 is pretty awesome, 14 was a good idea, 17 seems like you could have done a better job to me, too much negative space with the painted curb imo, 20, I'm not quite sold on the slightly askew framing, maybe it's an acquired taste for them, the aquarium shot is great, 23 underwhelms me compared to your other work, 24 is some really creative framing +3, 25 is pretty awesome, probably one of your best in the set.
26 looks nice... but it's too composited looking out of the set (14 doesn't count, cause it's pretty damn awesome).
28 in the bar looks great, and is your best of that part, imo.
30 is well done, but a bit too cliche for my tastes.
31 and 32, I feel you could have done much better compared to the rest of the images in this gallery ;P.