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Adam, welcome! Actually, I agree with you, I think this self-portrait came out pretty good considering you were holding the camera out in front of you like that.
On the second shot, a single-light portrait can always be a challenge. I would recommend that you find a second light source: a window, a reflector, something. You just need something to keep the details in the shadows. Good start. Keep 'em coming!