Archive 2012 · woman in front of a window

p.1 #1 · woman in front of a window

Nov 10, 2012 at 09:39 PM

Steady Hand
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p.1 #2 · woman in front of a window

You wrote "Thanks"

Does that mean you want comments or critique or what?

Nov 10, 2012 at 09:43 PM

p.1 #3 · woman in front of a window

c&c are welcome. haha~~~
Steady Hand wrote:
You wrote "Thanks"

Does that mean you want comments or critique or what?

Nov 10, 2012 at 10:05 PM

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p.1 #4 · woman in front of a window

OK.

Quick Comment: It appears the window is squeezing the woman in this composition. I would prefer to see more space around the woman, less window.

Nov 10, 2012 at 10:49 PM

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p.1 #5 · woman in front of a window

Steady Hand wrote:
OK.

Quick Comment: It appears the window is squeezing the woman in this composition. I would prefer to see more space around the woman, less window.

Agree.

You don't need the window as much as you need the LIGHT from the window.

Nov 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM

p.1 #6 · woman in front of a window

@Steady Hand, @Jim Rickards, thanks for pointing out the problem.

Nov 11, 2012 at 04:54 PM

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p.1 #7 · woman in front of a window

Steady Hand wrote:
OK.

Quick Comment: It appears the window is squeezing the woman in this composition. I would prefer to see more space around the woman, less window.

Good observation.

Nov 11, 2012 at 05:21 PM

p.1 #8 · woman in front of a window

got it. thanks

benj wrote:
Good observation.

Nov 12, 2012 at 09:07 PM


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