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p.1 #1 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


Not a comment but proposed title. I don't normally do street photography but saw this chap at St Pancras Station, London earlier this year and thought it looked better in B&W C&C appreciated
Niall







Nov 04, 2012 at 02:46 PM
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p.1 #2 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


Much goodness here.

Lots of lines (might need a touch of help to straighten verticals) and repetition, a variety of tonal values and a message that is very deliverable. Can't ask for a whole lot more. Nice job.

Processing is going to be a matter of taste & style. I might consider a bit of a crop to take out the bright reflections @ top of frame that competes/draws away from the subject. Took a stab at straighten/crop for perspective / illustration.







Nov 04, 2012 at 02:59 PM
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p.1 #3 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


Thanks, definitely improves it
Niall



Nov 04, 2012 at 04:11 PM
 

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p.1 #4 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


Nice work Niall.
A worthy scene with great lines, diagonals and the subject is well-positioned to continue to make a statement in the frame and how he is looking into the scene.
Excellent choice for BW and the conversion looks very good.
Scott



Nov 04, 2012 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #5 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


Wonderful image, lines etc. as Kent and Scott note. I enjoy the evocative aspect: exactly what is he waiting for? Why is he waiting, etc.?

A variation re-work...I tried, with little success, to recover detail from blocked up highlights. I think the ultimate result is a slight darkening, still lacking detail. Anyway, some sharpening, straightening, crop, touch of tone...and slight mid-tone contrast bump at end.

Again, great image Niall, thanks for sharing!

Regards,

Bob








Nov 04, 2012 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #6 · And I'm Still Waiting!!


I think this needs the deeper shadows.
Scott



Nov 05, 2012 at 01:56 PM





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