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p.1 #1 · Esma Part 2.


This is the 2nd part of the same shoot posted on http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/1159451 of Esma.

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More images from this shoot can be viewed at: http://www.thatstheshot.com.au/blog/2012/10/22/esma-voloder

Thank you for viewing and all comments are welcome as usual : )



Oct 24, 2012 at 01:22 AM
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p.1 #2 · Esma Part 2.


NICE!
Do you mind a few picky thoughts? Very picky.
1. Her hair poking out from under her arm (camera left)
2. That expression is so wonderful - now get rid of the hair over her right eye :P
3. I almost have nothing to say - but the boot lace and funny belly shadow
4. I got less here other than the peek of her leg at the bottom - adjust the crop?
5. She has such beautiful eyes and skin - why is there a bag under her left eye?
6. I got nothing!

Thank you for posting these, I am torn between tossing my kit in the trash and being inspired.
Cheers
Tobin



Oct 24, 2012 at 01:51 AM
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p.1 #3 · Esma Part 2.


TobinJD wrote:
NICE!
Do you mind a few picky thoughts? Very picky.
1. Her hair poking out from under her arm (camera left)
2. That expression is so wonderful - now get rid of the hair over her right eye :P
3. I almost have nothing to say - but the boot lace and funny belly shadow
4. I got less here other than the peek of her leg at the bottom - adjust the crop?
5. She has such beautiful eyes and skin - why is there a bag under her left eye?
6. I got nothing!

Thank you for posting these,
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Thanks Tobin for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated : )



Oct 24, 2012 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #4 · Esma Part 2.


7



Oct 25, 2012 at 11:20 AM
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p.1 #5 · Esma Part 2.


Not a fan of the processing on 2, but the rest are really great, as usual.


Oct 25, 2012 at 02:03 PM
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p.1 #6 · Esma Part 2.


jfinite wrote:
Not a fan of the processing on 2, but the rest are really great, as usual.

Thank you



Oct 25, 2012 at 11:27 PM
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p.1 #7 · Esma Part 2.


Lovely, lovely series. My fav? I would say #5. care to share some pp tips?


Oct 26, 2012 at 09:23 PM
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p.1 #8 · Esma Part 2.


dragon_eye wrote:
Lovely, lovely series. My fav? I would say #5. care to share some pp tips?

Thanks. With #5, it's quite simple, the shot already have a very colorful background and outfit as the base to work on. So in photoshop, I lift up the mid tone in the curve, then I duplicate the layer, then set layer blend mode to "Soft Light" then bring back opacity of the blend layer to taste Hope that helps.



Oct 27, 2012 at 07:52 AM
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p.1 #9 · Esma Part 2.


Thank you!


Oct 27, 2012 at 02:31 PM
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p.1 #10 · Esma Part 2.


dragon_eye wrote:
Thank you!

You are welcome



Oct 29, 2012 at 12:49 AM
 



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p.1 #11 · Esma Part 2.


Beautiful shots.
Did you use any strobes or available light?
If it is obvious in the photos, I don't see it or lack the experience to notice it.



Oct 29, 2012 at 02:24 AM
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p.1 #12 · Esma Part 2.


vchowdhary wrote:
Beautiful shots.
Did you use any strobes or available light?
If it is obvious in the photos, I don't see it or lack the experience to notice it.

Thanks. I did use a speedlight on camera. If the subject is facing the sun, then I don't use it, but if the subject is facing away from the sun then I do. Also, use flash as fill light when I placed the subject in shade areas. Hope the helps.



Oct 30, 2012 at 08:16 PM
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p.1 #13 · Esma Part 2.


Excellent series - the only two I don't like are
#2 - the "claws" really bother me
#5 - simply don't like her expression.
The rest are very well posed and composed - having a hard time picking a favorite.



Nov 02, 2012 at 03:43 AM
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p.1 #14 · Esma Part 2.


AlexF wrote:
Excellent series - the only two I don't like are
#2 - the "claws" really bother me
#5 - simply don't like her expression.
The rest are very well posed and composed - having a hard time picking a favorite.

Thank you for the comments Alex, much appreciated.



Nov 04, 2012 at 08:13 PM
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p.1 #15 · Esma Part 2.


She is just so beautiful as you've portrayed her, well, that's about all I can say #6 does it for me. Wow!


Nov 04, 2012 at 10:58 PM
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p.1 #16 · Esma Part 2.


anthonysemone wrote:
She is just so beautiful as you've portrayed her, well, that's about all I can say #6 does it for me. Wow!

Thank you Anthony.



Nov 07, 2012 at 06:58 AM
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p.1 #17 · Esma Part 2.


I'm in love !


Nov 07, 2012 at 01:35 PM
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p.1 #18 · Esma Part 2.


Bruce wrote:
I'm in love !

Thanks Bruce.



Nov 15, 2012 at 02:10 AM
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p.1 #19 · Esma Part 2.


Great shots... love #1 (what would that look like with a T/S lens...?)... but dude, #3 for me....Boom! look at those legs That is an awesome shot!


Nov 16, 2012 at 05:11 AM
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p.1 #20 · Esma Part 2.


The whole set is just lovely. My favorites are 1, 3, & 6. You made her glow on all these images. Any pointers? Thanks!


Nov 16, 2012 at 06:27 AM
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