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Jacob D
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Wooden jigs in an old ship yard. C&C welcome.

1.
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8329/8091912229_b0edc47c10_b.jpg

2.
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8047/8091912643_5ac6ba2aef_b.jpg

3.
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8186/8091918464_eeca5f3505_b.jpg

Oct 15, 2012 at 06:03 PM

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p.1 #2 · Abandoned Tools

Just a little fill light, would strengthen these in my opinion.
Douglas

Oct 16, 2012 at 08:24 AM

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p.1 #3 · Abandoned Tools

Jacob, I really like the first two images.
Great mood, light and shapes to look at.
I'm with Douglas to open up the shadow parts a little to make them even stronger.
Chris

Oct 16, 2012 at 04:07 PM

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p.1 #4 · Abandoned Tools

strong images, like the 1 and 2 best

Joe

Oct 16, 2012 at 04:19 PM

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Thanks all for the comments. I've taken the C&C and re-worked them (originals still above, for now). Do you prefer these versions better?

1.1
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8476/8097108200_f629e538e8_b.jpg

2.1
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8049/8097100591_4a1b85e243_b.jpg

3.1
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8473/8097109164_ed70fab87e_b.jpg

I do prefer these, but I think I will have to go back and reprocess them from the beginning unfortunately. If I wouldn't have toned them in SEFX I probably could have got away with it. These adjustments were made to the TIF files output from SEFX. In LR4 I adjusted the shadows and selectively dodged/burned a couple of spots. Anyone see the problem this created?

Oct 17, 2012 at 10:00 AM

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p.1 #6 · Abandoned Tools

Jacob, I think it look better now.
Especially the rework from the first image.
Chris

Oct 18, 2012 at 04:38 PM


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