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Karen, thanks for your comments.
I used the same formula in each shot.
Opening the raw image I set the Fill Light to 50, then I opened the image into CS5.
WB is Auto
From there I set:
I'm not sure what you mean by dropping the vibrance and saturation somewhere between -10 and -20 each.
I've updated the second shot using levels and moving the mid tone slider to the right, does this look better?