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p.1 #1 · Small Copper


Some from the weekend, appreciate any feedback as love to improve!


Small Copper by Turkey Trader, on Flickr


Small Copper by Turkey Trader, on Flickr


Small Copper by Turkey Trader, on Flickr


Small Copper by Turkey Trader, on Flickr

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Sep 26, 2012 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #2 · Small Copper


Another nice set Steven.
My only suggestions would be :

1. I would crop some of the flowers off the top. That would put your butterfly in the center left of the frame , bringing more attention to it.
I have cropped it and will take down if you wish. It is just to give you an idea . I also did just a little bit of sharpening. Again, I will remove it you wish.
2. Crop again, but this time from the bottom and just a little from the top.

Birdie







Sep 26, 2012 at 02:47 PM
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p.1 #3 · Small Copper


Thanks for the imput Birdie, and very happy with your thoughts and that you have taken the time and effort to illustrate them! Only way I am going to learn. I guess with number 1 I liked the arrangements of flowers which is why I cropped it as I did but as my aim is the butterfly what you have shown makes perfect sense.

Thank you again, really appreciate it

Steven



Sep 26, 2012 at 04:26 PM
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p.1 #4 · Small Copper


Meant to also say, not very good at sharpning my images - I use lightroom for post, but really could do with a good guide as to how to go about this art - if any one could point me in the right direction that would be awesome!


Sep 26, 2012 at 04:28 PM
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p.1 #5 · Small Copper


Like the first 2 shots
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Sep 27, 2012 at 06:09 AM





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