p.2 #1 · Lenticular Cloud Over Pothole Dome: Yosemite High Country
I like what you've done with this revision. Good catch to notice the right edge of the small cluster of trees at lower right - I had missed that, and it seems like an important detail. If it were mine, I might play around with a curve to perhaps slightly lighten the foreground left granite just a bit - but see what Michael says!
Nice work.
Dan
There is an entirely different photograph made from close to the same location at my blog today. I shot with a very long lens to tightly control a composition that includes Mt. Conness peaking over the ridge above Young Lakes that leads to Ragged Peak, with some dusk-lit trees in the foreground. If you look closely at your photograph, you can see mine near the right edge - which might give you an idea of how long a lens I used! (http://www.gdanmitchell.com/)
