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Hope you like

James

Mar 07, 2012 at 10:40 AM

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p.1 #2 · 1st black and white on here

First a New-to-FM Welcome!
Second,
I really like this shot, and I am not a fan of selective color. But it makes total sense here.
I like the textures, the shallow DOF, contrast.
One nit to my eye: the horizontal OOF "line" on the right pointing at the meter is a bit distracting even with its leading back to the subject. I might clone it out or darken it significantly.
Scott

Mar 07, 2012 at 11:01 AM

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p.1 #3 · 1st black and white on here

Wow Scott, I didn't even notice that line. Great advice. I will do one or the other later on tonight. Thanks for the welcome and the reply!

Mar 07, 2012 at 11:05 AM

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you are welcome

Mar 07, 2012 at 11:08 AM

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p.1 #5 · 1st black and white on here

neat image. and the tonal processing is well done.
regards and welcome, tom

Mar 07, 2012 at 11:19 AM

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p.1 #6 · 1st black and white on here

Welcome to the forum, James.
I like the composition, and the right things are in focus.
Even the selective color works well here.
Nice work all 'round.
Charlie

Mar 07, 2012 at 07:46 PM

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p.1 #7 · 1st black and white on here

I like it. It's got me looking for some change.

Nice work.

Carl

Mar 07, 2012 at 10:19 PM

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p.1 #8 · 1st black and white on here

I like it, even the OOF line, but I'd be curious to see what it looks like if you block that out.
I almost missed the color. I'm slightly color blind.

Mar 07, 2012 at 10:33 PM

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p.1 #9 · 1st black and white on here

Welcome to the forum James, great start and keep them coming.

Cheers Ray

Mar 08, 2012 at 02:42 AM


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