1: try cropping to square to eliminate the space left and right
2: too much space at top and not enough at right, looks like 4x6, try 5x7 and re-center
3: like this one
4: love the action but the cut off body parts on the girl are distracting
5: understandable
6: need to re-level, have seen this type of shot many times but never a real eye catcher in the bunch
7: would like to see it without cropping off the right arm
In general, good exposures, some peak action. Keep it coming, it gets better the more you shoot. BTW: the watermark isn't necessary here on FM, especially when requesting C&C's.
Thanks Matt. Will work on the cropping and empty space.
schlotz wrote:
Hi Theron, couple of comments for ya:
1: try cropping to square to eliminate the space left and right
2: too much space at top and not enough at right, looks like 4x6, try 5x7 and re-center
3: like this one
4: love the action but the cut off body parts on the girl are distracting
5: understandable
6: need to re-level, have seen this type of shot many times but never a real eye catcher in the bunch
7: would like to see it without cropping off the right arm
In general, good exposures, some peak action. Keep it coming, it gets better the more you shoot. BTW: the watermark isn't necessary here on FM, especially when requesting C&C's.
