Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

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Wagompel
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p.1 #1 · Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

Hey guys!

Last night I made a (glamour)portret of my fiancee.
I'm not a very experienced photographer so still learning....that's why I would appriciate your comments a lot so I can improve my skills

portret, glamour, softbox, beautydish

Feb 13, 2012 at 10:38 AM

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p.1 #2 · Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

I like it. How did you manage the hair? Did you use a hair blower or have her turn her face quick? I am not sure if it is my monitor but I notice a light green hue on the right bottom corner. Not a big deal.
Nice work.

Feb 13, 2012 at 10:41 AM

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p.1 #3 · Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

Thanks!
It was indeed some head turning (so there were a lot of crappy attemps before this one

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Feb 13, 2012 at 11:05 AM

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p.1 #4 · Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

I like the composition and the wild hair. Nice job with that.

The exposure is an issue. You have blown the exposure of the red channel on all the skin areas. The result is an unnatural looking white skin. You can check this with a look at the histogram.

Feb 13, 2012 at 11:48 AM

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p.1 #5 · Portet of my fiancee...comments please!

I think the result would have been much better with a bit more smile on her face. The background might be a bit too over exposed. You can see it from the out of focus part of her hair. The hair bokeh becomes kinda dirty when the background is too bright.

Her hair works quite well.

Feb 13, 2012 at 10:38 PM

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