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Apologize if you've already seen and tired of this one. All C&C appreciated.

Applying different processing, things learned (I hope) since then.

Bob




  NIKON D2X    32mm    f/3.2    1/10s    400 ISO    -0.7 EV  




Feb 12, 2012 at 01:20 AM
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I think I have loved every variation of this shot that I have seen.
I wonder how this would work with some of the reds reduced in the sheets.
Scott



Feb 12, 2012 at 02:17 PM
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Cute Kido you got Bob..

I am seeing the series for the first time so I find it nice, tender and cute. Only one suggestion, the eyebrows seems to have merged with skin / light. You might wanna try to recover some of it.





Feb 12, 2012 at 03:15 PM
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sbeme wrote:
I think I have loved every variation of this shot that I have seen.
I wonder how this would work with some of the reds reduced in the sheets.
Scott


Artifact of silver gelatin tone, thanks for noticing as I missed it and honestly I do not know if it is an accurate representation of the process or not.

Anyone else?

Kaden?

Bob



Feb 12, 2012 at 06:58 PM
 

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nitind wrote:
Cute Kido you got Bob..

I am seeing the series for the first time so I find it nice, tender and cute. Only one suggestion, the eyebrows seems to have merged with skin / light. You might wanna try to recover some of it.



@nitind,

Glad you like it - eyebrows: her skin is fair and hair so light and fine, there visually is not much there to recover.

And she is all GO. Fortunately her mother and father (our daughter) are the ones who have to keep up with her

Bob



Feb 12, 2012 at 07:02 PM
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As before, an adorable and excellent moment captured. I like the processing on this version better than I recall the previous versions.

There is a minor slightly odd speckling in the shadow area under her left temple. If you decide to print it large you may want to revisit that area.







Feb 12, 2012 at 08:54 PM
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Good eye - thanks. Sharpening gremlins no doubt.

Bob



Feb 12, 2012 at 09:45 PM
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Dealing with my own Gremlins sharpens the eye. Little devils!


Feb 12, 2012 at 10:33 PM





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