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Rick Schump
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p.1 #1 · The dunes


A few friends and I did a short trip down to Death Valley and VOF ( Including Tim Oneill and Alan Lichty ). The dunes hadn't seen much wind over the last few days and the tracks and interest were high. It was difficult finding comps. that weren't trampled thru. Here is a take away from near sunset.
Taken with the 7D, 100 - 400, ISO 200, F11, 1/80., C&C appreciated. Rick



Feb 11, 2012 at 12:24 AM
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p.1 #2 · The dunes


I like the comp, Rick, and the delicate texture of the dune.

An aside - my guess is that you rotated/cropped it as there is a smal bit of white in the lower left.



Feb 11, 2012 at 01:11 AM
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p.1 #3 · The dunes


Sweet! Shoulda gone for one more dune I guess.


Feb 11, 2012 at 01:18 AM
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p.1 #4 · The dunes


This must have been right before you and Ted started back to the van given the light in this scene. Your trek up the big dune looks like it was worth it - I didn't see anything like this down below where Tim and I hung out.

I like the comp and the effect of the telephoto compression for this scene - that worked out well here.

Alan



Feb 11, 2012 at 01:21 AM
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p.1 #5 · The dunes


Rick

Very nice great patterns and lines here really bummed I could not make this trip with you guys I know Tim sure had a great time, looking forward to more post of the trip

Ray Still



Feb 11, 2012 at 01:36 AM
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p.1 #6 · The dunes


I like the abstract composition. The lines are well seen. I don't think color is helping the photo and maybe hurting it. I think a b&w edit would play off the lines more and be more fitting. The 60kb jpeg is too low of quality imo. Too noticeable.


Feb 11, 2012 at 02:50 AM
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p.1 #7 · The dunes


Don - Thanks, you're obviously right on the crop / rotation. I guess it never goes well posting when it's late and you're tired.
Tim - Sorry you weren't up to the last climb. Had a nice trip though, Thanks for all the navigating, wisdom, and company. You presence really made this trip that much nicer. Rick
Alan - Thanks. It was nice having you along, you're such an electronic wizard. Enjoyed the company and the fresh perspectives. Rick
Ray - We missed you, your ears must have been burning while we were out, as you were in a number of our conversations. Thanks for the post.
Zaltz - Tried something different in posting this, and between the crop and importing it came out as a lot smaller image. I think more cropping than work flow though. Thanks for the comment, I post a B&W when I can.
Thank you everyone for the comments and the time. Rick



Feb 11, 2012 at 10:25 AM
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p.1 #8 · The dunes


I think you've got a great shot here, but as Zach stated, the color might work better either a bit brighter or as a gray scale image. I'm sure there foot prints everywhere limiting your options, especially slogging up a dune only to find the path that someone else took. Sounds like you guys had a great time, did you camp?


Feb 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM
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p.1 #9 · The dunes


Hey Rick,

What a cool shot! Your composition is really good!

Jim



Feb 11, 2012 at 01:25 PM
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p.1 #10 · The dunes


This really makes you stop and just look at it, wonderful shot.

Cheers Ray



Feb 11, 2012 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #11 · The dunes


Rick- whether the unusual color is a good thing or not is arguable. For me, I've been to those dunes many times and never see colors like those- so I like it. And the perspective and effects of the long lens add even more appeal to me.
Nicely done- and unique (which isn't so easy there ).
Charlie



Feb 11, 2012 at 09:31 PM
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p.1 #12 · The dunes


I got a very different look. I like it. Congrats Rick!


Feb 11, 2012 at 09:54 PM
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p.1 #13 · The dunes


Lovely shot, Rick. That first ridge reminds me of a breaking wave. Very cool.

Cheers,
Ed



Feb 12, 2012 at 10:50 AM
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p.1 #14 · The dunes


Fine shot Rick, it's a keeper.
David



Feb 12, 2012 at 01:27 PM
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p.1 #15 · The dunes


I'm really liking those curves, Rick. Nice eye for sure.

JBR



Feb 13, 2012 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #16 · The dunes


Good eye for the lines and curves. I think I like the color version better, although this looks like an image that you could play with more to find different interpretations.

Dave



Feb 13, 2012 at 11:06 AM
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p.1 #17 · The dunes


Great image. I like the colour version better, the tones are really excellent.
Ute



Feb 14, 2012 at 03:42 AM
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p.1 #18 · The dunes


Sweet composition, Rick. Gotta love those curves and depth. Color is better for me, too.

Barry



Feb 14, 2012 at 08:41 AM
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p.1 #19 · The dunes


Rick,
The color shot has a good feel to it, and to me looks almost like a chalk drawing. It's different, and is likeable to me.
Mike



Feb 19, 2012 at 01:28 AM
Rick Schump
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p.1 #20 · The dunes


Ed - thanks for the comment and the analogy. Glad you like it.
David - Thanks
John - We got to out, it's been to long
Dave - Thanks for comments, glad you like it.
Ute - Thanks, when are you guys heading back this way again?
Barry - Thanks, keep those cypress shots coming they are sweet
Mike - Thank you, we need to get out.
Thank you everyone for the comments, sorry I'm slow on getting back to these, life has been full lately. Rick



Feb 19, 2012 at 02:40 PM
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