#4 really hits the nail on the head. I havent seen much of this type of work I liked, but this set is very nice to see. Nice work on 1 and 6 and creating the feel for this type of incredibly bright light and using it to your advantage.
Love 2 and 3 poses and angles you chose. Lots of nice variety. I almost wish #2 included more of her legs. Maybe even the same with #3 but nice work on exposures.
#5 dont really dig the effect, would have loved to see it with the same feel as the others.
#4 is just off the chain with the connection and composition.
Nice set but it seems like they're all body facing right, would be good to see a bit of variation on that but I'm sure there's more from the shoot and it's just a fluke that these are all like that! That's my nitpick over.
As for a crit I'd say in 2 her face in very central and that leaves dead space to the right which could have easily been sacrificed to show more of her IMO.
In #3, I find her head too close to the edge of the frame. I see the difficulty in composing it differently and like how the legs exit the frame at the bottom.
In #6, I see a better balance of composition when a little is taken off the top.
I like #5 - the grainy effect and her expression. It's only fault may be not blending in with the other shots in the set.
Feb 10, 2012 at 05:39 PM
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Thank you everyone for your time and feedback. I will definitely take a look at the things mentioned and see what improvements I can make.
The B&W photo was an experimental PP that I use for weddings and kind of liked how it turned out.
MakoShark wrote:
#4 really hits the nail on the head. I havent seen much of this type of work I liked, but this set is very nice to see. Nice work on 1 and 6 and creating the feel for this type of incredibly bright light and using it to your advantage.
Love 2 and 3 poses and angles you chose. Lots of nice variety. I almost wish #2 included more of her legs. Maybe even the same with #3 but nice work on exposures.
#5 dont really dig the effect, would have loved to see it with the same feel as the others.
#4 is just off the chain with the connection and composition.
Langran wrote:
Nice set but it seems like they're all body facing right, would be good to see a bit of variation on that but I'm sure there's more from the shoot and it's just a fluke that these are all like that! That's my nitpick over.
As for a crit I'd say in 2 her face in very central and that leaves dead space to the right which could have easily been sacrificed to show more of her IMO.
vealski wrote:
Very nice. I love #5 even if others don't.
Jim Rickards wrote:
A very nice set. My compliments on a fine job.
I have only small nits to point out.
In #3, I find her head too close to the edge of the frame. I see the difficulty in composing it differently and like how the legs exit the frame at the bottom.
In #6, I see a better balance of composition when a little is taken off the top.
I like #5 - the grainy effect and her expression. It's only fault may be not blending in with the other shots in the set.
