These dont really work for me as presented, Karen.
In the first the reflected colors in the water do not transition realistically, with banding of the hues. In the original is a faint almost vertical line in the water. A real part of the image but an odd one. It is exaggerated in the reprocessed versions.
I find the vignette two obvious in both, more so in the BW.
Compositionally they are fine to my eye.
