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+1 @ drawing the eye toward her (albeit a bit bright for my taste) / away from the planes ... always "What's the point?" / "Where are you trying to take your viewer?"
This is part of why I have largely abandoned the concept of anything (other than snaps, pj or events) being complete/finished @ sooc ...i.e. the need for "finishing". We have techniques for drawing the eye through optics and perspective (selective focus, foreshortening, etc.) for "in camera" drawing, lighting for "environmental" drawing, and good ol' darkroom/PS for refinement of that which wasn't accomplished by the first two.
It's been along time since I first thought that AA was "cheating" by doing his darkroom "manipulations". These days' it's hard for me to imagine many images that don't benefit from asking/considering how it is that you want to "draw the eye" of the viewer as part of your work (both pre- & post- capture) ... whether that be "in camera", lighting or PP. Ultimately, it is the final image that you put in front of the viewer ... however you got it there ... and stopping @ "in camera" may leave many images short of the excellence they can be.
As always, S&P to taste.