This was from 2010 archives and I shot this next to a window so its just natural light...did some PP to give a different look with a gray bg (as the original wall was white)....not sure if its working....C&C is greatly appreciated....can we make this better??
thanks sboerup....this is not me :-).....i intentionally tried that halo to give it a different look....i guess that didn't work...will have to remove that then...
To me there is not enough contrast in the image. Making it gray scale and making the wall gray - it all kind of blends.
In my opinion what it would take to "make it better" is to leave the wall white as you shot it, and use a higher contrast black and white conversion. But this is really a matter of taste.