#TWO. Nice lighting again. Looks like a cramped composition. His shoulder could be included in the frame.
# THREE. Fingers cut off on both sides. His arm is too prominent in the frame. His arm is closer to the lens, therefore it appears larger. The subjects here are the two faces, so choose a pose that doesn't make the arm take up so much of the frame. There's nowhere you can crop this one to fix this.
Agree with above. Also, on my work laptop I can see lines and artifacts on the black backdrop in 2. I have this very same problem all the time when I do my editing on my MAC, all looks fine and the back looks jet black, but on my laptop you can see the creases and marks. It's very annoying.
For me, the colour cast in 3 is slightly different to the other 2. Their skin colour looks off. Maybe try tweaking your WB a little so that all 3 shots match.
ct8282 wrote:
For me, the colour cast in 3 is slightly different to the other 2. Their skin colour looks off. Maybe try tweaking your WB a little so that all 3 shots match.
ct8282 wrote:
Agree with above. Also, on my work laptop I can see lines and artifacts on the black backdrop in 2. I have this very same problem all the time when I do my editing on my MAC, all looks fine and the back looks jet black, but on my laptop you can see the creases and marks. It's very annoying.
For me, the colour cast in 3 is slightly different to the other 2. Their skin colour looks off. Maybe try tweaking your WB a little so that all 3 shots match.
Buy a MacBookPro. Problem solved.
Excellent posses, good lighting; I would put a light in the back of the subjects so it would be a separation from the background and also would give a 3D to the images, over all, excellent job.
