i had a look at this earlier but wasn't sure what was going on...is this an ad for the ski gear?...as the shoes are the most prominent thing in the image...another thought is maybe one guy prefers women and one prefers skis...maybe you can explain a bit more about it...you say a funny series but maybe my sense of humour isn't great but i cant see anything funny
If you're a skier all of these shots are great. The point is that he'd rather be with skis than the hot chick because the ski gear is awesome. It looks like an ad/promo for Atomic. It probably doesn't make a ton of sense to people who don't ski but it's probably not a big deal since the shots are clearly aimed at skiers.
The only crit I have is to just work on the comp a little. Most of your shots just seem a little awkward and I can't really explain why. In this one I would have had the guy wearing the ski boots and make his hand position mirror the hand position of the other guy.
And on a side note, if you're looking to do more of these shots you should do a "Candle lit dinner" shot where he's on a date with his skis.