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I was digging around my MV files earlier in the week looking for some images for a project I am working on and found this. Everytime I dig back in the MV files from this trip I seem to find images I missed , never worked on or never liked the original processing. I was attending a work shop with Southwest Perspectives -Derek von Briesen at the time I shot this, awesome trip.
C&Cis always appreciated, thanks for viewing. Dean

Edited as per Andrews suggestions:
http://dc-photography.smugmug.com/Landscapes/Monument-Valley/i-3rZkFzc/0/X2/20100828-IMG7287-Edit-X2.jpg

Also added this to see if it may work better in b/w ?
http://dc-photography.smugmug.com/Landscapes/Monument-Valley/i-pgQHnGj/0/X2/20100828-IMG7287-Edit-Edit-2-2-X2.jpg

Edited on Feb 02, 2012 at 08:27 PM · View previous versions



Feb 02, 2012 at 04:54 PM
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p.1 #2 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Dean some great light here, but the pics pretty small, would love to see it larger. Also can you pull back a bit more detail in the sun? I reckon if you can it would be fantastic
cheers Andrew



Feb 02, 2012 at 05:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Andrew, thanks for your input here, I went back and try and work some more detail in the hot spot and posted a larger image, I also thought it might look neat as a b/w so I added that as well. Dean


Feb 02, 2012 at 08:23 PM
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p.1 #4 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Hey Dean,

The B&W... Wow! You nailed it with the B&W, well done on the adjustments.

Jim



Feb 02, 2012 at 10:10 PM
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p.1 #5 · Monument Valley ... (edited


You have certainly packed some drama into the B&W version. Great light rays.

Cheers Ray



Feb 02, 2012 at 10:21 PM
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p.1 #6 · Monument Valley ... (edited


LOVE the B&W. Awesome shot. Great conversion.


Feb 02, 2012 at 10:25 PM
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p.1 #7 · Monument Valley ... (edited


My wife took a photo here a few weeks ago in harsh light and good clouds. I didn't think much of it until I converted it to B&W and I really liked it.


Feb 03, 2012 at 10:09 AM
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p.1 #8 · Monument Valley ... (edited


I like the B&W also.
Greg



Feb 03, 2012 at 10:38 AM
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p.1 #9 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Definitely works better in b&w.


Feb 03, 2012 at 02:03 PM
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p.1 #10 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Dean, I think you nailed it with B&W! Really digging the sun rays!

Dejan



Feb 03, 2012 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #11 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Dean, in contrast with everyone else, I really like color version.
Golden hues are amazing, I really enjoy them. However, the dark hole in a cloud is distracting, and pulls attention off the beautiful valley below. May I suggest to crop about 1/3 off the top, and see what happens?



Feb 03, 2012 at 04:28 PM
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p.1 #12 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Another for the B & W. Wow.

Chuck



Feb 03, 2012 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #13 · Monument Valley ... (edited


I prefer the B&W. Very nicely captured. I would really enjoy visiting there someday soon.

Excellent work.



Feb 03, 2012 at 11:59 PM
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p.1 #14 · Monument Valley ... (edited


Thanks everybody your comments and input are greatly appreciated. Dean

Aleksandra , I will certainly look at the crop I am trying a few things with this image that area works with the b/w but is a distraction on the color version.



Feb 04, 2012 at 07:16 PM
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p.1 #15 · Monument Valley ... (edited


While i know not everyone is a fan of HDR Photography this would have been a great opportunity to try blending different exposures to get a little more detail from the mid-ground. The Beta release of Lightroom 4 also has a "shadows" slider that might also help recover some of the detail.

The composition is awesome.



Feb 04, 2012 at 10:27 PM
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p.1 #16 · Monument Valley ... (edited


I love both.. but I must say, that BW is awesome..
Love to have that one hanging on my wall!



Feb 05, 2012 at 12:11 AM
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p.1 #17 · Monument Valley ... (edited


I like the color version one the best. I was there in the fall and didn't see a cloud until the last day and the was barely. Nice shot.


Feb 05, 2012 at 09:32 AM





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