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Trying a 4x5 crop of my earlier post, taking into account some of the critique I received. Thanks to all of you who regularly provide constructive feedback.
Jon
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Feb 01, 2012 at 11:20 PM
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I like this 4x5 crop better than the last post. I did not read any critique there however that made you decide to do this?


Feb 01, 2012 at 11:48 PM
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nice colors


Feb 01, 2012 at 11:57 PM
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Hey Jon,

I didn't see you there! I was down shooting the same thing but on the side of the arch. Did you leave before it got too dark?

I sure like your look here... Very cool patterns in the water and I like your crop!

Jim



Feb 02, 2012 at 02:31 AM
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Hey Jon, that sunset looks familiar to me as well. I was shooting to the left of Jim on the same day. Beautiful image Jon and I like this cropped version better too.


Feb 02, 2012 at 03:02 AM
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I find this very harmonious with the sun and the bright foreground water forming a pleasing diagonal. The light and colours are excellent.
Ute



Feb 02, 2012 at 03:16 AM
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I like your re-crop. I thought about suggesting a crop when I saw the first version, but was a bit worried that you'd lose some of the water's energy in the lower left. However, I think your re-crop looks very good. More balanced to my eye. A fine image either way.

Dave



Feb 02, 2012 at 05:31 PM
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I don't know what the first one looked like...I really like this one.

John



Feb 02, 2012 at 08:19 PM
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Jon, beautiful image a lot to like here, your comp , the reflection and setting sun light hitting the fg rocks work really well. I looked at the original post and I like this crop better. Dean


Feb 02, 2012 at 08:36 PM
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Jim Fox wrote:
Hey Jon, I didn't see you there! I was down shooting the same thing but on the side of the arch. Did you leave before it got too dark?

I sure like your look here... Very cool patterns in the water and I like your crop!



Jim I stayed way into the darkness, but the best shots I took were right at sunset. Thought I might see you down there?
Jon[

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Feb 02, 2012 at 08:57 PM
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Tuan Le wrote:
Hey Jon, that sunset looks familiar to me as well. I was shooting to the left of Jim on the same day. Beautiful image Jon and I like this cropped version better too.

Did you post an image from your shots that night?
Jon




Feb 02, 2012 at 09:03 PM
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Jfarmer wrote:

Jim I stayed way into the darkness, but the best shots I took were right at sunset. Thought I might see you down there?
Jon[


Hey Jon,

I had gotten there about 3 pm, yeah sunset was cool, but the hour leading up to it I got some really cool shots too..., maybe we need to get FM locator beacons we can carry so we know when another FM member is in the area?

Jim



Feb 02, 2012 at 10:28 PM
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Jon, I didn't take too many but I got one image from the outing I like. I'll post that one up real soon tonight.

Jim, let's see those cool shots you big tease. Get cracking processing those images! I like your beacon idea... maybe a FM'er locator app!



Feb 02, 2012 at 11:12 PM
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Good comp and great light. You might want to try darkening some of the edges.


Feb 02, 2012 at 11:16 PM
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This one is very well balanced. I like it Jon.
David



Feb 03, 2012 at 12:19 PM
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Nailed it! Great job!

Dejan



Feb 03, 2012 at 03:24 PM





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