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lwrnclightner
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p.1 #1 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


Ok, I came to you guys with my first wrestling outing and I left with plenty to chew on. I can't tell you how much your feedback pointed out my shortcomings, and I only hope that this go round shows that now that I have a clue what to look for, that I am ready for another study session with the guru's.

Ok guy's let the "Grasshopper" have it......

1
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-CMNVqKF/0/L/EOL15537-copy-L.jpg

2
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-CDZ8KKH/0/L/EOL15532-copy-L.jpg

3
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-XnWCGgH/0/L/EOL15481-L.jpg

4
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-wZ3FqNV/0/L/EOL15475-copy-L.jpg

5
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-FJfR8Zz/0/L/EOL15466-copy-L.jpg

6
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-9zfgzt2/0/L/EOL15680-copy-L.jpg

7
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-5tQD658/0/L/EOL15662-copy-L.jpg

8
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-hgsBwzs/0/L/EOL15630-copy-L.jpg

9
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-gwjn848/0/L/EOL15615-copy-L.jpg

10
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-JDprQV2/0/L/EOL15604-copy-L.jpg

11
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-hq3HfPR/0/L/EOL15462-copy-copy-L.jpg

12
http://essence-of-light.smugmug.com/Sports/Edgewood-High-Takes-on-Bel-Air/i-r6254Cj/0/L/EOL15552-copy-L.jpg




Jan 27, 2012 at 12:42 AM
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p.1 #2 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


Overall not bad. Just watch your horizons on some. Some look a little flashy. Some are just right. I tend to like the tighter ones better but that's personal preference. I don't feel like we need to see the whole move head to toe. I focus on the facial reactions. #6 is way cool.


Jan 27, 2012 at 06:23 AM
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p.1 #3 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


On the whole these are very good shots.

As Paul said, some look pretty "flashed".

Some are not as bright as they could be (#12) which is accentuated by the dark frames. For this "presentation" thread I think that you could assume we all know how to add frames to our shots. I'd rather see your images without them, and perhaps a little larger.

#3 and #9 are my favs.



Jan 27, 2012 at 05:11 PM
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p.1 #4 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


P Alesse and WmPat Thanks for your feed back, I will keep your pointers in mind my next go round. Good stuff.


Jan 27, 2012 at 11:33 PM
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p.1 #5 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


Horizons definitely as Paul mentioned,

These look pretty good. Are you shooting direct flash? Just curious.



Jan 28, 2012 at 12:04 AM
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p.1 #6 · More Mat Time (HS Wrestling) c&c appreciated


canons900 wrote:
Horizons definitely as Paul mentioned,

These look pretty good. Are you shooting direct flash? Just curious.

Thanks 900, yes this set is direct with a slight modifier to soften a little, as stated by p aleese I need more softening apparently.



Jan 28, 2012 at 07:47 AM





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