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jrrhodes
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p.1 #1 · darling girl in pearls


What do you guys think of this one? It is a little low key but I liked the nice window light.

J.R.







Jan 23, 2012 at 03:12 AM
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p.1 #2 · darling girl in pearls


Jr, its not low key (at least not in a photographic sense). her left shoulder and face is a little too hot for me. I would have also liked a little more eye contact. all that said, I like the image.


Jan 23, 2012 at 05:21 AM
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p.1 #3 · darling girl in pearls


kevindar wrote:
Jr, its not low key (at least not in a photographic sense). her left shoulder and face is a little too hot for me. I would have also liked a little more eye contact. all that said, I like the image.


Thanks for the feedback. I'll play around with the brightness. Now that you mentioned it I am noticing those areas as too bright in relation to the overall image.

JR.



Jan 23, 2012 at 12:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · darling girl in pearls


I like the softness and overall look. Sweet.
Her left shoulder is too bright. I wonder about taking a bit off the left side of the image.
Will you repost after it tunes up more?
Scott



Jan 23, 2012 at 01:18 PM
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p.1 #5 · darling girl in pearls


sbeme wrote:
I like the softness and overall look. Sweet.
Her left shoulder is too bright. I wonder about taking a bit off the left side of the image.
Will you repost after it tunes up more?
Scott



Thanks Scott. I'll repost the new version for sure.

J.R.



Jan 23, 2012 at 02:26 PM
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p.1 #6 · darling girl in pearls


Nah- you didn't fool me with the title, J.R. This isn't the you-know-what forum .
I really like the image. A cute girl, playing dress-up. Except her pearl necklace is twisted- I love that bit.
Charlie



Jan 23, 2012 at 07:54 PM
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p.1 #7 · darling girl in pearls


love the tones here, especially the sheen of window light on her hair. Beautiful. Just burn her left shoulder a tad a you are set. Really pretty image.

Also, love the square crop

Edited on Jan 23, 2012 at 09:54 PM · View previous versions



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p.1 #8 · darling girl in pearls


Beyond cute! Love it! And the bright spots don't bother me either, although technically I understand how a bit of burning them in might work.

-Tim



Jan 23, 2012 at 09:46 PM
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p.1 #9 · darling girl in pearls


I think it's a classic, the only bright bit that worries me would be the top right hand side. Well done.

Cheers Ray



Jan 23, 2012 at 10:26 PM
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p.1 #10 · darling girl in pearls


Ok here is another try. I burned the hot spot on the upper right and on her arm. I also cropped the left a slight amount. Does this help or hurt?

Thanks all for the comments and suggestions.

J.R.







Jan 25, 2012 at 03:15 AM
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p.1 #11 · darling girl in pearls


J.R. In my opinion the crop helps a bit, but the burning in helps a lot!
Charlie



Jan 25, 2012 at 05:56 AM
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p.1 #12 · darling girl in pearls


Nicely captured. Demure before her time I'd say. Excellent mood piece.


Jan 25, 2012 at 06:14 AM
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p.1 #13 · darling girl in pearls


Spot on

Cheers Ray



Jan 25, 2012 at 10:38 AM





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