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IMO (and that is what it is, an opinion) it is just too harsh. A large print would seem to screen at me.
At first it interests me and draws my eyes in, but then it starts to hurt my eyes and make them wander off, not focussing in any one area for too long.
Like many other way-overdone HDR images, that is what I equate this to in terms of B&W.
I would LOVE to see this picture done up similarly, but not with such harsh HDR.