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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Harbour


Hi everybody,
what do yuou think of this shot? Anay suggestion for improving it in post?

Thanks
Francesco

http://my.1x.com/media/110484-F.jpg



Jan 10, 2012 at 11:44 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Harbour


It's too bright for a night scene and saturated overall for my tastes. In terms of picture elements there are four eye catching centers of interest, the church on the hill and its strong reflection and the guy in the foreground and the red boat in the foreground which form a triangle with the white boat in the middle of it.

In the edit below I cropped in tighter on the boat and guy to make those elements like bookends framing the church, then I desaturated and adjusted tonality with adjustment layers.

http://super.nova.org/EDITS/Harbor.jpg



Jan 10, 2012 at 01:25 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Harbour


Thanks to you all for your suggestions ... for your info, it was an evening scene


Jan 10, 2012 at 05:53 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Harbour


Thanks AuntiPode, two good ideas!


Jan 11, 2012 at 08:57 AM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Harbour


The problem compositionally for me with this shot is the guy in the foreground. Him being in the photo doesn't add anything interesting to the storyline here for me because I don't know him personally and can't recognize him from the back. So for me he's a brightly lit blight on an otherwise blissful harbor shot.

My "rule of thumb" for whether or not something in a photo is a distraction or not is the "Would you miss it?" test. For example if you first saw the photo like this....

http://super.nova.org/EDITS/Harbor2.jpg

--- would you think "Hey, why isn't there a guy sitting on the dock with his back turned to the camera in the shot?" Probably not, so that's a clue that all things considered the photo might work better without the guy sitting on the dock in the photo. Sometimes the best approach to deal with distractions is to just crop them out rather than trying to tone them down as I did with my first edit.




Jan 11, 2012 at 01:19 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Harbour


cgardner, another interesting suggestion from you! thanks again

cheers, francesco



Jan 11, 2012 at 01:34 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Harbour


I like it, AuntiPode! Thank you very much, francesco


Jan 12, 2012 at 07:13 AM







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