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p.1 #1 · Shipwrecks


Still a work in progress. but I got a lot of good constructive feedback on the last one.
Felt I hurried through it too much.

So here is another one I am working on. I feel it is to the point of showing to get some feedback on it as well now.

All comments and suggestions welcome here. Make the final image better. So thanks in advance.




things I know I will be working on still. the shadows of the ships, the cross in the clouds. not sure if I like the lightning bolt. More atmospheric effects in regaurds to the fog bank. Fading the lighthouse more. I think it stands out too much right now.



Nov 09, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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p.1 #2 · Shipwrecks


Keep them coming Keith. This is great. I think the lighthouse look nice here but my thoughts are its a bit bright in the FG by the hiker. The sky looks awesome.


Nov 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM
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p.1 #3 · Shipwrecks


Thanks Klaus for the feedback. So I need to tone down the lighthouse a bit you think? Blend it or fade it better with the fog?


Nov 10, 2011 at 10:41 AM
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p.1 #4 · Shipwrecks


KKapple wrote:
Thanks Klaus for the feedback. So I need to tone down the lighthouse a bit you think? Blend it or fade it better with the fog?



I think the lighthouse looks good as it is now. I do think the ground in the FG of the hiker could be toned down just a tad bit. I tend to look towards that bright area in the FG.



Nov 10, 2011 at 10:55 AM
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p.1 #5 · Shipwrecks


Gotcha.


Nov 10, 2011 at 11:02 AM
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p.1 #6 · Shipwrecks





Here is a rework on the Drifter IV.
Deleted some ships, extended the fog and added a shadow on the lighthouse.



Nov 10, 2011 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #7 · Shipwrecks


I would scrap the lightning bolt. It is very bright surrounded by much darker tones which means it brings a lot of attention to itself. This competes with the guiding line coming from the cross. Without the bolt the images will read much more naturally.


Nov 10, 2011 at 10:22 PM
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p.1 #8 · Shipwrecks


Agree on the bolt...I will remove it as well and repost later.


Nov 11, 2011 at 10:23 AM





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