Im no pro but as a viewer... I think the finish is too clean and can't tell if that building is out of business (no "closed" sign or "for rent" signs) if you have to work with what you have, I'd rough out the finish just a bit.
If it's a car lot and the intent of the photo is to convey it's out of business, lack of cars, not the building would more strongly convey the message. Personally, I'd shoot it with a superwide at a low angle to show empty space where cars would be, but aren't. The building with the sign would be just big enough to show what the business was.
