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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Portrait grab...


From the Rugby pitch Saturday...C&C welcomed...too dark? Flat?

thanks,

Bob



Oct 23, 2011 at 06:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · Portrait grab...


I like it.
Maybe a bit heavy on the vignette in the upper corners.
Not too dark for me.
Scott



Oct 26, 2011 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #3 · Portrait grab...


I agree, a bit too aggressive with the vignette. Good photo otherwise


Oct 29, 2011 at 03:25 AM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #4 · Portrait grab...


Thanks Scott and @infilm for looking and comments,

Bob



Oct 29, 2011 at 02:11 PM
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p.1 #5 · Portrait grab...


A vignette works like a mat or frame to visually guide the viewer into the more important center content.

When a dark vignette is added to a photo with light edges and darker core content it has the opposite effect, becoming a distraction that catches the eye and pulls it back out to the edges.

More effective on photos with lighter edges is to vignette lighter in the corners to deliver the same subliminal perceptual message as darker edges on a middle-tone sky or frame edge, "Go look at the more important stuff in the middle and stay there."

Either way if the viewer consciously notices the vignette it becomes a distraction and fails to work as intended. I vignette the edges of most of my shots with tone and blur, but not so much that anyone usually notices



Oct 29, 2011 at 02:23 PM
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p.1 #6 · Portrait grab...


Consider a little clockwise rotation and perhaps some selective exposure/gamma changes and some gentle vignette.


Oct 29, 2011 at 05:02 PM





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