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Archive 2011 · Brillant Fall color

  
 
Littlefield
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p.1 #1 · Brillant Fall color


I took this and did not saturate and just did little vibrance in LR . Taken with 70-200 f4 L IS F8 1/100sec. ISO 200 .
I thought it was kinda unusual and like it . What do y'all think ?
Thanks
Don


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Oct 16, 2011 at 11:22 PM
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p.1 #2 · Brillant Fall color


Nice color find.
I like the way the diagonal lines draw the eye in towards the water.
Several problems with the image, however.
The most striking is the large, out of focus foreground. With the strong reds attention is really drawn there and the out of focus and sheer size of this portion of the image overwhelms the distant water. Better if you focussed 5-8 feet in, possibly more stopped down to f11. You would need a tripod or bump your ISO. However, this might have been better taken with a wider lens.
If your goal is the water, then I think you were too far away. Cropping the bottom 35-40% of the image improves the comp.
Scott



Oct 17, 2011 at 06:54 AM
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p.1 #3 · Brillant Fall color


sbeme wrote:
Nice color find.
I like the way the diagonal lines draw the eye in towards the water.
Several problems with the image, however.
The most striking is the large, out of focus foreground. With the strong reds attention is really drawn there and the out of focus and sheer size of this portion of the image overwhelms the distant water. Better if you focussed 5-8 feet in, possibly more stopped down to f11. You would need a tripod or bump your ISO. However, this might have been better taken with a wider lens.
If your goal is the water, then I think you were
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Thanks ,Scott for taking a look and the suggestions.
Don



Oct 18, 2011 at 12:12 AM





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